-Recognise how many tens and hundreds are in numbers.
Here is my work.
Welcome to my blog, I am a learner at Greymouth High School in Greymouth, New Zealand.
Title
A Short Statement about the topic.
eg. ‘Rugby League Is A Great Sport’
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Pets are fun!
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Overview/ Statement of position
A brief statement of your view about the topic. What you believe or want to argue.
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Many people around the world have pets. I think that it is a good idea to have a pet. Also they are fun to have around!
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Series of Arguments
Reasons
Your points supporting your view about the topic. Your arguments to support your statement and information to support these arguments.
Remember
-argument
-supporting detail, reasons, examples
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Firstly, pets can be trained to do specific things. For example, police dogs are trained to sniff things out. Also dogs can be trained to detect cancer or cancer cells. Airport dogs can sniff out bad things in the bags.
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Secondly, most people with disabilities have a pet. For example, blind people have a dog to help them see where they are going. They make people with depression feel happy and comfort them. Also I truly believe that people with disabilities should have a pet.
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Thirdly, pets are good for fitness. I believe that you should get a pet to help you keep fit. It also gives you something to do when you are bored. I think walking a dog is good fitness and fun to do.
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Finally, pets can give you food. For example Sheep = wool, cow's =milk, chickens= eggs, goats=milk. I think it is a good idea to have one of these animals because they can give you food and you do not need to buy it.
In conclusion, I think having a pet is a good idea because, they help people detect cancer, good for people with disabilities, good for fitness and finally they are good to have so you can get food.
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Concluding statement
Summing it up. A summary of your arguments and your view on the topic.
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In conclusion we need to fix our field because we don’t have enough room to play, we need our field for sports training and games, we need the field for events like the gala, and it promotes good health and exercise. It is vital that we have a good field at school.
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Title
A Short Statement about the topic.
eg. ‘Rugby League Is A Great Sport’
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Fix Our Field!
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Overview/ Statement of position
A brief statement of your view about the topic. What you believe or want to argue.
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I strongly believe that we should fix our field! My reasons are that we need the field for space to play on. We need it for training for sports events, and so we can use it all year long. We also need it because we are all so crowded. Finally we need it so we can keep fit.
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Series of Arguments
Reasons
Your points supporting your view about the topic. Your arguments to support your statement and information to support these arguments.
Remember
-argument
-supporting detail, reasons, examples
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Firstly, we should fix our whira (field) because it takes up a lot of our space to play on. I think we need more space to play on because we are all crowded on the playground and the court. There is also a very strong risk of getting an injury because you could get hit by a ball or bat.
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Secondly, I think we need our field fixed so we can train for taputapu tākaro (sports) events. If we don’t get our field fixed we can not train and we won’t get good at our sports. For example we have Rippa rugby coming up and we need to train.
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Thirdly, I believe we need our field fixed so we can use it. We have not been able to play on our field much because it has to be so muddy. All our events can’t happen because of the field being out. For example we are not having our gala this year.
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Finally, we need our field to keep fit. A way for us to keep fit is (whati) running around and hīanga (playing.) At the moment there is not much space to run around on.
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Concluding statement
Summing it up. A summary of your arguments and your view on the topic.
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In conclusion we need to fix our field because we are all crowded on the court, so we can train for taputapu tākaro (sports) events, it is always muddy and finally we need more space. This is why we need to get our field fixed. FIX OUR FIELD!!
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