Hermits
Lives in complete isolation
Staring up at constellations
Where he lives he will never tell
Hidden away in a dark gloomy shell
Sitting by himself feeling alone
Next to an ancient grey stone
Under calm turquoise seas
Sitting as quiet as can be
On top of the crab sits a vivid shell
Emerging from the sea around
a salty smell
Hi Hannah, my name is Jeremiah and I go to Panmure Bridge School in Auckland. I really enjoyed reading your poem about hermit's. It was well written and very descriptive.I really liked the part when you talked about the vivid shell. One thing I will say is that next time you should write a blurb to help us understand what you did. Apart from that it was great. Keep it up.
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