Tuesday 14 March 2017

My Sea Week Writing

For Sea Week we wrote about why the ocean is important. Here is my writing work. Please leave a kind, positive and thoughtful comment.


4 comments:

  1. Suzanne Kelsall14 March 2017 at 20:38

    Hi Hannah. I enjoyed reading about why our oceans are important to us. I can see you have worked hard on this and have thought about why it is important to you. Well done. Love Mum.

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    1. Kia Ora Mum,
      Thank you for the comment on my work. I have worked hard on my work and I am happy that you have commented and read my work.
      Love from Hannah.

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  2. Hi Hannah. I also look for shells on the beach.
    You had a really good hamburger paragraph with lots of information. I hope people learn to look after the sea. from Nevey.

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  3. Hi Nevaeh,
    Thank you for the comment on my work.

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Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.